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    dots Submission Name: Matryoshka Doll Babydots

    Author: Mud
    ASL Info:    18/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 55/98/57
    Words: 365
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMatryoshka Doll Babydots

    Everyone runs
    to break the gates behind which
    The Oldest 17 Year Old In The World sits

    He sighs
    And steps into the carnival ring

    Somebody turns his clockwork wheel
    And he mechanically whirs at everyone,
    "I will tear my skin out and feed it to someone!"

    People clap and whoop
    And little kids run around their houses yelling,
    "I will tear my skin out and feed it to someone!"
    And their parents pat them on their heads
    Isn't he precious

    Back in his tent
    The Oldest 17 Year Old In The World
    watches another elephant vanish
    from behind his curtain of childhood

    So bored
    He puts on a suit
    and chain-smokes in B&W

    And talks in a Chicago accent to a table,
    "Say, ladies, you wanna go back to my place?"

    It was so much fun

    Then he ate a peach

    Then he peed a ghost onto a wall

    Then the next day he went to the carnival ring
    And announced to everyone
    that they didn't need to wait for the world
    to blossom into one big flower of truth and dharma and what not
    if they could pee ghosts on walls

    Nobody quite agreed
    So when he was asleep
    They did like he told
    peeled off his skin when he was asleep
    and dipped it in candy and ate it
    while going round
    and round
    on carousels

    When he woke up without one layer
    The Oldest 17 Year Old was a little bit smaller
    But a little bit more clear headed

    And he decides,

    "I'll climb back into my mother
    She'll climb back into hers
    To form an amazing Matryoshka universe

    Where we will lay dormant
    Like the unripe seeds
    In the womb
    Of a watermelon

    Thinking of our citrus childhoods
    and refreshing"

    Submitted on 2010-03-08 13:40:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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