All inside my mind.... by Mythica

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Submission Name: All inside my mind.... dots

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Author:	Mythica
ASL Info:	17/female/KY USA
Elite Ratio:	1.79 - 11/31/16
Words:	121

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
Total Views:	1134
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	811

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Don't ask where it came from. I had one of my dreams and it was all I heard through the nightmare. It wouldn't leave me be....

All inside my mind.... dots

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All of it
The dark and inky black surroundings
The horrid thoughts and pictures
Thae faces with a thousand meanings
All inside my mind

The Dreams with light and hope
Are pushed back by something New
Running down an Icy slope
All inside my mind

The more I tell myself it is a dream
I find that the capacity is reached
And things burst at the seams
All inside my mind

Wandering, looking, fighting, seeing
I tremble in the cold, but warm from somewhere else
Shaking, sobbing, breaking, leaving
All inside my mind

I think about everything and nothing now
I tend to notice shadows
Perhaps I'll put my life on a shelf
All inside my mind....

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i like the way this piece is written and can really feel the words good write!!

| Posted on 2010-03-09 00:00:00 | by BlackBloodDrop | [ Reply to This ]
i like the way this piece is written and can really feel the words good write!!

| Posted on 2010-03-09 00:00:00 | by BlackBloodDrop | [ Reply to This ]

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