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    dots Submission Name: Greatest Feelingdots
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    Author: Strator
    ASL Info:    22/M/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 160/142/67
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsGreatest Feelingdots
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    Love is the greatest feeling,
    Itís immeasurable, itís depths going deeper than the sea,
    longer than space.

    Love is something that is unbreakable, when the bonds are true.

    MY LOVE FOR YOU babe goes beyond these thingsÖ
    Itís transcended these Earthly descriptions.

    OUR LOVE for each other is blessed by an ALLPOWERFUL, MOST HIGH God,
    That nothing on Heaven or Earth can break.
    He bonds us together and gives us the courage, the compassion, the trust and desire to love each other.

    YOU are the woman for me, which I place my heart, my love and compassion.
    YOU are the woman whom I want to wake up to each and everyday, share laughs with and happy tears with.

    A burning flame
    Thatís my love for you, a love I can't control baby, nor do I want to.

    So remember when your eyes meet mine,
    I love you with all my heart,
    And I have poured my entire soul into you,
    Each day
    Right from the very start, blessed by Our Lord and Savior

    I love you my Darling
    So very much!!




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