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    dots Submission Name: Tanka by Princess Nukadadots

    Author: bowler1992
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This is a tanka by princess nukada and I please need help analyzing it. I also need to know if it has similes, metaphors etc. Thank u!

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    dotsTanka by Princess Nukadadots

    I waited and I
    Yearned for you.
    My blind
    Stirred at the touch
    Of the autumn breeze

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