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    dots Submission Name: Tanka by Princess Nukadadots
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    Author: bowler1992
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    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This is a tanka by princess nukada and I please need help analyzing it. I also need to know if it has similes, metaphors etc. Thank u!


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    dotsTanka by Princess Nukadadots
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    I waited and I
    Yearned for you.
    My blind
    Stirred at the touch
    Of the autumn breeze




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