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    dots Submission Name: Blue Eyes (finished)dots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    23/Female/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.68 - 277/293/232
    Words: 389
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 758
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2256



    Description:
       FINALLY finished. it makes me happy. I actually finished a while ago, but didn't post it. Doesn't really matter, I doubt anyone will read this.

    B.J.


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    dotsBlue Eyes (finished)dots
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    I get lost everytime I look into your blue eyes
    The butterflies in my stomach takes me by surprise
    I know I shouldn't think about you this way.
    I can't help it, you've been on my mind all day.
    I sneak a peek when I think you're not looking at me
    I blush and try to turn away before you can see.
    I know I shouldn't think about you this way
    I can't help myself, I wish you'd go away.

    When I look in your blue eyes
    They take me for a ride.
    I'm lost and I'm gone
    lets get away for awhile.
    When I look in your blue eyes
    They take me for a ride
    Come take me for a ride.

    I try hard not to read too much in what I see
    Think that you have some kind of feelings for me.
    I know you shouldn't always be on my mind this way
    I can't help myself, and I hope to see you today.
    I melt inside when you turn and look over here
    But getting hurt again is my greatest fear.
    And I know you shouldn't have this effect on me
    I can't help myself, I wish my mind would be free.

    When I look in your blue eyes
    They take me for a ride.
    I'm lost and I'm gone
    lets get away for awhile.
    When I look in your blue eyes
    They take me for a ride
    Come take me for a ride.

    I say its nothing
    when I can feel it
    and I know you can feel a connection too.
    I want to run away
    but you're pulling me back
    I know I shouldn't get any closer to you.
    I'm starting to struggle
    I know I want you
    And I'm trying hard to hold it all inside.
    I feel you near me
    I want to touch you
    It makes me wish all of my feelings would die.
    And I know I shouldn't think about you this way
    And I know I can't help myself..........

    When I look in your blue eyes
    They take me for a ride.
    I'm lost and I'm gone
    Let's go away for a while.
    When I look in your blue eyes
    They take me for a ride.
    Come take me for a ride.




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    ||| Comments |||
      One thing I have to say that I found off was this:

    "When I look in your blue eyes
    They take me for a ride.
    I'm lost and I'm gone
    Let's go away for a while.
    When I look in your blue eyes
    They take me for a ride.
    Come take me for a ride."

    Throughout the whole song I could feel the beat, especially since I was reading it out loud. Haha. But the last two lines, well "they take me for a ride" fit, but "come take me for a ride" just didn't do it for me. Maybe you should sing it to me so I can get it. Haha.

    But other than that, I found this peace...magical? I loved it, really did. Thank you for sharing, and you were wrong, cause SOMEONE read it. haha. Cheers my friend
    | Posted on 2010-04-01 00:00:00 | by Dark Dann | [ Reply to This ]


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