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Blue Eyes (finished)


Author: daughterofdeath
ASL Info:    23/Female/West Virginia
Elite Ratio:    4.68 - 277 /293 /232
Words: 389
Class/Type: Lyrics /Longing
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FINALLY finished. it makes me happy. I actually finished a while ago, but didn't post it. Doesn't really matter, I doubt anyone will read this.

B.J.


Blue Eyes (finished)



I get lost everytime I look into your blue eyes
The butterflies in my stomach takes me by surprise
I know I shouldn't think about you this way.
I can't help it, you've been on my mind all day.
I sneak a peek when I think you're not looking at me
I blush and try to turn away before you can see.
I know I shouldn't think about you this way
I can't help myself, I wish you'd go away.

When I look in your blue eyes
They take me for a ride.
I'm lost and I'm gone
lets get away for awhile.
When I look in your blue eyes
They take me for a ride
Come take me for a ride.

I try hard not to read too much in what I see
Think that you have some kind of feelings for me.
I know you shouldn't always be on my mind this way
I can't help myself, and I hope to see you today.
I melt inside when you turn and look over here
But getting hurt again is my greatest fear.
And I know you shouldn't have this effect on me
I can't help myself, I wish my mind would be free.

When I look in your blue eyes
They take me for a ride.
I'm lost and I'm gone
lets get away for awhile.
When I look in your blue eyes
They take me for a ride
Come take me for a ride.

I say its nothing
when I can feel it
and I know you can feel a connection too.
I want to run away
but you're pulling me back
I know I shouldn't get any closer to you.
I'm starting to struggle
I know I want you
And I'm trying hard to hold it all inside.
I feel you near me
I want to touch you
It makes me wish all of my feelings would die.
And I know I shouldn't think about you this way
And I know I can't help myself..........

When I look in your blue eyes
They take me for a ride.
I'm lost and I'm gone
Let's go away for a while.
When I look in your blue eyes
They take me for a ride.
Come take me for a ride.




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  One thing I have to say that I found off was this:

"When I look in your blue eyes
They take me for a ride.
I'm lost and I'm gone
Let's go away for a while.
When I look in your blue eyes
They take me for a ride.
Come take me for a ride."

Throughout the whole song I could feel the beat, especially since I was reading it out loud. Haha. But the last two lines, well "they take me for a ride" fit, but "come take me for a ride" just didn't do it for me. Maybe you should sing it to me so I can get it. Haha.

But other than that, I found this peace...magical? I loved it, really did. Thank you for sharing, and you were wrong, cause SOMEONE read it. haha. Cheers my friend
| Posted on 2010-04-01 00:00:00 | by Dark Dann | [ Reply to This ]


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