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    dots Submission Name: Your Book dots
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    Author: GhostGirl3
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    dotsYour Book dots
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    your book is your shelid.
    it hides your from the real world.
    it covers your face from the light.
    always hiding the truth.
    your book is misleading to the world.
    only i know how to make you put away your book.




    Submitted on 2010-03-10 11:18:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes indeed.....we all have our own private little books. Very creative from you and well written.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2010-03-10 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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