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    dots Submission Name: Hatedots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    23/Female/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.68 - 277/293/232
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 688
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    Description:
       More writing, had a crazy writing binge. This is the last one in this group, at least so far. Pretty sure its not the last about this particular person, although I wish it was.

    B.J.


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    dotsHatedots
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    I hate you so much.
    I hate you because
    I want to be in your arms.
    I hate you because
    I want to kiss you
    and I know it's wrong.
    I want you to go away,
    to the point I'm hysterical
    and I'm close to tears.
    I hate you because
    I want to hate you.
    Nothing would make me happier
    than to be able to look at you
    and honestly hate you.
    But as much as I try
    I can't force myself to.
    I can't sleep because
    I don't want to see you.
    You haunt and tease me,
    someone I want
    but I can't touch.
    It grows my hatred,
    and as much as I try,
    my hatred isn't really there.




    Submitted on 2010-03-10 14:22:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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