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    dots Submission Name: Smoke Ring Kisses And Spent Casing Tear Dropsdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsSmoke Ring Kisses And Spent Casing Tear Dropsdots
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    How can I begin to remember what it's been like to be just who I am.
    When my last words choked under a smoke ring kiss, small hearts displacing a clear line of sight.
    Freedom is clasped hands around your face, a glance in the eyes, I swear it will be alright.
    Who knows what is to come, maybe more than can be seen.
    Silver words shine in my eyes, bottled up my heart until I show just what I am.
    A man, I hope on two feet I can stand.

    You shine with light, I burn out dark.
    You smile with life, I grin out of shame.





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      Oh wow. One thing I have to say, I absolutely adored the ending. What's with all these good poems with no comments? Do people just read and are left breathless and what beauty you writers spark?

    Ha.

    Anyhow, I liked the piece in all. Thanks for sharing my friend.

    And ps: This will be favored.
    | Posted on 2010-04-01 00:00:00 | by Dark Dann | [ Reply to This ]


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