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    dots Submission Name: My Scarlet Letterdots
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    Author: mistiekidd
    ASL Info:    31 like it f Al
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    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       Nathaniel Hawthorne is the author of Scarlet Letter the clasic novel, I just used some simularites, I'm writing about a premiscous girl that has been raped and taken advantage of, and how she may as well be wearing an A because without even trying to know her or understand she is automaticaly labled bad names.


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    dotsMy Scarlet Letterdots
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    I'm made to face the world
    wearing my shame,
    mistakes, scars, pieces
    of what's left of my heart
    in bold dark print that catches
    the eye.
    So know one can miss.
    I mess up, I don't even try
    to hide it!
    My punishment for my sins,
    is that I wear them for everyone
    to see every single day,
    just like the Scarlet Letter A!
    Except my pain is more
    complicated, all the same people
    see them and judge me and I am
    hated.
    I didn't deserve to bear them all,
    the men who put them there were
    to weak, so I wear each one everyday.
    I wear them proud so everyone
    can see that I'm just a girl.
    Sometimes I mess up and
    bad shit just happens to me!




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