[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Mirrors of Sorrowdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
    Total Views: 380
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1682


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMirrors of Sorrowdots

    The deepest echo
    The faces of pain
    Stare me down from their mirrors of sorrow
    And their hollow refrain

    They look to me
    Want me to let them live again
    In their emptiness to feel
    They want me to remain

    And they look to you from the shadows
    From the darkest pits they devise
    To taint all your laughter
    And hide behind your eyes

    Eating your heart
    For the tears that you’ve shed
    Crashed to the bottom
    The pools of blood that you’ve bled

    A cry of anguish circles the world
    The piteous voice, the scream of a child
    You stare me down from these mirrors of pain
    And bid me live with their hollow refrain

    It is in your dungeon
    No one can see
    To reach out someone
    And tell them, this emptiness is not me

    It is with the eyes of stars I have walked
    And in beauty left my lingering thought
    And with your sighs
    With Gods we have talked

    Staggered in colour, we paint how to be
    The child of our heart
    In the flight of our love
    The freedoms ballet

    But from the deepest echo
    Come the faces of pain
    Stare down from their mirrors of sorrow
    With their hollow refrain

    They look to me
    Want me to make them live again
    In their emptiness to feel
    They want me to remain

    They look from our shadows
    From the treacherous pits of their lies
    To break all our laughter
    And hide behind our eyes

    Submitted on 2010-03-11 14:29:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]