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    dots Submission Name: Love's Ghostdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLove's Ghostdots
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    It's the blush of a feeling
    after the true emotion fled,
    the thought of you in the middle of the night,
    the aftershock of a kiss from long ago.
    It's imagining him smile just like you,
    but it's just a shadow of a feeling,
    a glimmer of what once was a flame.





    Submitted on 2004-02-13 02:05:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      im gonna go to sleep and let this wash all over me...poignant in its lack of existence...
    but for me over simplified///your style preceedes you thus hindering your expression. can you sit still for one minute, i picture you a very busy impulsive person,,,this is a sweet piece, as are most of yours. a flashlight memory of a millisecond of time pulled out and mummified, but just lacks......it just makes me sigh massively afterwards and feel empty....noy for the longing of someone, but for the lack of being. which is maybe its strength to others,,,,give me something to bite, but the [censored] head off and spit it out[or dont]
    gravity always wins, and it wears himout..
    www.on1eday.co.uk
    | Posted on 2004-02-13 00:00:00 | by on1eday.co.uk | [ Reply to This ]
      dude that was great...I feel it totally like it is always there lingering at you. I feel like I could go write a poem....
    | Posted on 2004-02-13 00:00:00 | by Nashataku | [ Reply to This ]
      thinking of another when you are with someone else hmmm, must have left quite an impression, I like the write it feels honest
    | Posted on 2004-02-13 00:00:00 | by brokenbatman | [ Reply to This ]


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