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    dots Submission Name: Null Existence of Monomaniadots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 236
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsNull Existence of Monomaniadots
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    The clamouring cacophony of have it all
    Come to the feeding table
    Need it all, want it all, must of it all
    Gobble and dine on the succulence
    The sweet and epicurean banquet of living
    Dribbled from the feeding bottle
    The rubber teat of electronic plastics

    Soak, ruminate and conjugate
    In the cold cellar of this meat
    With its desperation
    And the self-preservation of its greed

    Happy now, to carry this crucifixion
    And walk with the sorry crown of thorns
    In a life of solace
    Counted one by one
    With bank accounts
    Behind the closed and locked doors of possessions

    Life
    Reduced to the folding paper and print
    Castrated by the colour of ink
    Need it all, want it all, must of it all
    And to have
    Is better than not

    Self-serving judgements spread the addiction
    Success or meaningless
    The pitiful goal of it all

    Such a fervent idealism
    Of subjugation and chains
    Intoned within this society of the living dead

    And love
    It walks the embittered alleys
    Filled with the chill of trade you, trade me
    For the allusion to, of happy
    Happy now, to carry this crucifixion
    And walk with the sorry crown of thorns
    In a life of solace
    Counted one by one
    With bank accounts
    Behind the closed and locked doors of possessions









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