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    dots Submission Name: Mad Dog Howldots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 283
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    dotsMad Dog Howldots

    Must be another full moon
    Crazy bastardly out on the prowl
    Kicking through the rose garden
    And stomping dandelions

    Something is growling in the drive way
    Stalking the window sill
    Scratching with its bark
    All the little artsy fartsy viciously ripped apart

    Cudgel of paws and talon of wicked claws
    Smashing all the china
    Hanging pretty on the walls
    It seeps out from the nighttime
    And trickles from the pores
    A dangerous little poet
    A wolf in angelís clothes

    And while I lie here in the darkness
    Feeling the venom off canines drip
    In the mad dog howl
    Somehow to get a grip
    And itís tearing up the concrete
    Comes crashing through the walls
    And to the moon
    The mad dog moon
    Itís vengeful nature calls

    Somethingís bristling in the hallway
    And snarling behind my door
    With laser eyes
    Will piece your very soul

    Comes sneaking up the back stair
    Dragging victims by the score
    And the darkest sounds of munching
    Come chewing from the black pits of its lair

    Must be the full moon out and hanging
    Crazy lynches on the prowl
    Grinning over supper
    With a zombie smile
    To rip apart all the artsy fart
    Incessantly with its bark
    And slink with all the truth
    Weíve hidden in the dark

    Hungry for your conscience
    Thereís blood in its begging bowl
    And a nasty smack hangs behind the crack
    Of the mad dog howl
    Itíll keep you from sleeping soundly
    Keep you fitful in the night

    Was that the snap of bone so vengefully
    Must be the mad dog howl
    Stomping the necks of dandelions

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