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    dots Submission Name: Humanity..dots
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    Author: BrokenAngelKat
    ASL Info:    20-F-NC
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 103/233/192
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
    Total Views: 543
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    Bytes: 545



    Description:
       Ok so I feel like shit. I just got a seasonal job I really wanted and now everyone's all pissed off because I'm the only one that got it when my fiancee's aunt didnt and HELLO! My fiancee applied too. But whatever. Fuck everyone right?


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    dotsHumanity..dots
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    Is not the essence of humanity to be human?
    Is not a reason for family support?
    If two family members apply for the same job or try for the same position on a team, should the losing member not be happy for the winner?
    Should the rest of the family be happy as well?
    YES.

    But humanity is fleeting.
    People now seem uncaring..
    Cold..

    Family members cause each other to cry..
    Friends fall apart to lies..

    Humanity..
    Darling, I want to destroy you.




    Submitted on 2010-03-12 15:53:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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