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    dots Submission Name: Mad Dog Moondots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 354
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsMad Dog Moondots
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    And if I wake up in the shivering
    Throwing my guts out in the sweat
    If I can still hear myself screaming
    In the middle of the night

    Was it the animal came crawling
    Through the ricochet of my dreams
    Did all you bastards come a calling
    In the shades of the Klu Klux Klan

    And Jesus hangs upon the rope
    With my pockets full of nails

    This time comes the mad time
    Dog haunting your romantic moon
    This time there is no next time
    It wonít be over soon

    I have traded all the Naziís
    For a police state and a flag
    And sold the blood of freedom
    For a banknote I never had

    And sent my sons and daughters out to fight
    For the profiteering war

    This legacy is a coffin
    Where I buried humanities soul
    And sold myself to aliens
    And believed in U.F.Oís

    Yes I bought up all the celluloid
    Brainwashed surgery for my mind
    Slapped the plaster of propaganda
    To the broken bones of human kind

    I became the singular epitome of my own deceit
    And dined with delicate chopsticks on the feast of shit

    Is it any wonder that I come crowding
    Strangling late at night
    Hunting through your pillow
    With the placards of the blind

    Trespass is the answer
    And Iíll ballet boot black into your mind
    And shred up every bible
    Every excuse you hope to find

    This time comes the mad time
    Dog haunting your romantic moon
    This time there is no next time
    It wonít be over soon

    And while the viscous dark is howling
    Sneaking up with its begging bowl
    I will be the faces of starving children
    I will carve your money into your conscience
    This time comes the mad time
    Of everything you lost
    This time there is no next time
    For counting up the cost

    I have traded all the Naziís
    For a police state and a flag
    And sold the blood of freedom
    For a banknote I never had





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