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    dots Submission Name: Marchdots
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    Author: moaxcym
    ASL Info:    23/m/Pakistan
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 155/196/85
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsMarchdots
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    Ours is a story
    That only autumn could complete.

    But I promise you, comrade
    That in the second spring
    We’d scale upon the walls of our hearts
    And paint the faded graffiti,
    That says, ‘God is great!’




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