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    dots Submission Name: Happy With Insanity ( for Amanda )dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 569
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsHappy With Insanity ( for Amanda )dots
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    Yep; you’re absolutely crazy
    Defined by which you would be devoid
    Of this social agreement to slavery
    And all its supposed, normality

    Yep, you are loopy
    Looney tune and rubber bins
    Fruit ball with a nut case
    Wrapped up in alien skins

    Yep, totally bonkers
    A form to be filled out in an asylum
    And the next of kin
    Must sign the waver

    Gone, out there, bibbaldey
    To stress a point
    Fringe
    Touring an insanity binge

    Ah, but look at you
    Bright eyed girl
    With all your messages of the heart
    You send out to the world

    Look at what you’ve seen
    See how far you’ve come
    Look back at what you’ve been
    See how far you’ve come

    How many links now, can you count upon the chains
    How much of this cultural crap have you lost
    And how much of you remains

    You are a child, picking diamonds from the universe

    What an art of courage
    Staunch spirit
    What an expression you have become
    Seeing through this nonsensical life
    And all its petty minded illusion ( delusion, confusion, normalization )

    All its have to be
    Normality

    So you’re tripping on a bug eye
    Wondering “ where the fuck am I ”
    In the real world, this is where you are
    Where poetry, art and heart
    Soul and strength
    And “ who you are ”
    Have walked out of captivity
    Have refused to participate in this bland mediocre
    Description and definition
    Of normality

    You have become a beacon
    A light
    A star
    A connection to the epitome of love
    You have become one of the very few
    Who can say; you know “ exactly “ who you are

    So don’t worry, my precious friend
    Such love and fortitude
    Has its reward in the end
    And all these scarecrows who call themselves humans
    Will have to lean
    On everything you have learned

    Yep, you are crazy
    If freak ball is the opposite of this
    Bland punctuated, sucking sickness they call normality
    Yep totally frikin goofy
    If you can see
    How humanity has and is used and abused
    By everything it is taught to think is worthy

    Completely doo-lally
    That’s you
    Off your rocker
    And around the twist
    And kinda excitable and kinda manic

    But I’ll tell you now
    My precious friend
    It’s a jaw dropping beautiful thing to see
    You
    Happy with insanity

    Even you have to admit
    There just aint
    Very many like you




    ( This comfortable and cosseting security of media and ego
    this life defined by indoctrination and fear
    this divorce from ourselves and the universal
    this pathetic excuse for living a life
    backed up by the propaganda of brainless, mindless agreement
    this normality
    this on mass, human slavery
    with all its paltry needs and wants amidst the plethora of things
    it is taught to need and want
    all of this
    this crime against life
    will end

    are they ready

    no

    but you are )










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      I love this piece it brings to mind so many of my friends including the boost I need some times. I look forward to reading more of you work and hopefully you will get a chance to check out some of mine. Great Job. -Starla
    | Posted on 2010-03-15 00:00:00 | by Thornful Rose | [ Reply to This ]
      This is awesome, and you should be PROUD of this. So often does self-ridicule hinder what we can really create for the world, be it an artistic or personal adventure.

    "So don’t worry, my precious friend
    Such love and fortitude
    Has its reward in the end
    And all these scarecrows who call themselves humans
    Will have to lean
    On everything you have learned"

    I love the scarecrow comparison. I'm not sure why it strikes me, but it does.

    So you’re tripping on a bug eye
    Wondering “ where the [censored] am I ”
    ...Amen, honey. Thank you for posting :)
    | Posted on 2010-03-14 00:00:00 | by Celeste J. Bell | [ Reply to This ]


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