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    dots Submission Name: Simplicity Reborn-dots
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    Author: TasteMyRainbow
    ASL Info:    17/Male/In your pants.
    Elite Ratio:    5.07 - 21/22/17
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Venting
    Total Views: 658
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 625



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       Just something i wrote a while ago. Can't really explain it too much. I'll just let the words do the talking~


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    Iíve been holding back too long.

    Abandoned words-

    Melancholy thoughts.

    I can hardly see this new;

    A catcher in the rye.

    The end has to be better.

    Swishing, swishing.

    Spit it.

    Scatter my vessels.

    I had once a million chances.

    I used them in second.

    Would you call me a fool?

    Or just a man with his head cut off?

    A decapitated soulless bastard.

    Yes.





    --simplicity reborn.




    Submitted on 2010-03-14 13:17:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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