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    dots Submission Name: Bread and Buddhadots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
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    dotsBread and Buddhadots
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    Cigarette butt
    Buddha
    Dog shit
    Buddha

    Get it

    Each other
    Buddha

    Donít feel like
    Buddha
    Though do you

    More like the bread
    Instead of the
    Buddha

    Separation is a concept of the ego
    Buddha

    Atom
    Buddha
    Quantum
    Buddha
    Theosophical theory of spiritual connectivity -
    - philosophising on the uniqueness
    - of material, physical reality
    - metaphysical personality
    - spatial individuality
    - funny though
    - isnít he/she
    - Buddha

    Sacred geometry
    Buddha

    Electric light bulbs
    Motorcycles
    And Zen
    Buddha

    Just another name
    Just another word
    Just another letter in an alphabet
    B-u-d-d-h-a

    Buddha in a rice bowl
    Buddha on your bread
    Buddha in the toilet
    Buddha in your head

    Tweedle dee
    And tweedle dumb
    Fiddly fye
    And diddly done

    The miracle of existence
    Consciousness awareness
    Lay back and count the stars
    And look inside your heart

    Buddha

    Buddha

    Buddha

    Buddha











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