Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Can You Find Me?dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Thornful Rose
    ASL Info:    23-female-California
    Elite Ratio:    3.74 - 141/186/49
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 446
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1005



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsCan You Find Me?dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Can you find me?
    by Hilary Coury
    -------------------------------------------

    What I want to know is,
    Can you really find me?
    I lost myself so long ago,
    and now who knows,
    where the winds have blown me.

    What I am in need of,
    Is someone to come and find me.
    But with each attempt
    someone else is left beside me.

    Together.

    Seperate.

    Lost.

    I cry a thousand tears,
    and stain the world
    in which I have created.
    Stuck in my illusions,
    that this is what my fate is.

    I may not have a family,
    but atleast I have someone
    on whom I can depend.
    willing to be lost
    just to save a friend.

    To all of you.
    Lost.
    To the ones who tried to save me...
    I am here beside you.
    and maybe one day you can find me.





    Submitted on 2010-03-15 05:18:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    183788

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry