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    dots Submission Name: Once it was in The Cradle of Gaiadots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 401
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsOnce it was in The Cradle of Gaiadots
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    The earth, moist and cool
    Its seasons of passing
    Beneath my soles
    Bare foot I walk upon the sacred

    Deep dark the forest
    A canopy strung with stars
    I am the paintwork of blending
    Moving through the moon lit shadows

    In the clearing, fire lit to music playing
    Soft light dancing
    Faces amidst the leaves of knowing
    Is a canopy of trees hung about with stars

    Beneath every nuisance movement
    Muscle worships and mind remembers
    Always is connection
    Every breath is filled with the kiss of one

    I have no questions
    Only time to flow
    Every gesture is acceptance
    Every echo, which I know

    The family whispers
    Poets intone their thoughts softly to the air
    Delicate prayers
    With soft bass drums to depth

    And I close my eyes
    Within the canopy of stars
    And lay with Gaia
    On the naked earth

    When once it was in the cradle

    And I sit here now
    So divorced
    An aching longing
    Burning so far into the back of my throat

    I am so removed from my instinct
    So unwritten; with the knowledge
    I was born with
    So blinded


    I am lost now
    In a shimmering deceit
    Glittering in its inherent darkness
    Cuts the soles from my feet

    I am dieing now
    In a vacuum of disconnection
    In a dead electrified
    Explosion of sensory deprivation

    I know nothing
    As I walk along with a madness
    I have been told
    Is reality

    I am a twentieth century
    Of fucked up dependence
    I am a bubble gum mask
    A television

    But………….

    Beneath every nuisance movement
    Muscle worships and mind remembers
    Always is connection
    Every breath is filled with the kiss of one

    Deep dark the forest
    A canopy strung with stars
    I am the paintwork of blending
    Moving through the moon lit shadows

    I have no questions
    Only time to flow
    Every gesture is acceptance
    Every echo, which I know

    And I close my eyes
    Within the canopy of stars
    And lay with Gaia
    On the naked earth

    The earth, moist and cool
    Its seasons of passing
    Beneath my soles
    Bare foot I walk upon the sacred

    I remember
    And this aching longing burns so far into my heart
    But still: I remember
    When once it was in the cradle




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