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    dots Submission Name: Trustdots
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    Author: alyssafrench16
    ASL Info:    17/f/inherroomville
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 8/22/19
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 467
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsTrustdots
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    I thought it was too good to be true,
    I guess I was right,
    What's wrong is wrong,
    and never'll be mine,

    But I guess the past,
    is the past,
    because something I've lost,
    I'll never get back.




    Submitted on 2010-03-15 21:15:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I agree. How many chances is enough till you no longer can trust someone again.
    | Posted on 2010-03-31 00:00:00 | by YC013 | [ Reply to This ]


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