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    Author: col13x
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    Are we so desperate
    Seeking one answer; an answer
    From one answer to another

    Unfulfilled
    And never satisfied
    The playthings fill our lives

    What does it mean to be truly inspired

    Cop out in the saturation of the romantic
    Hearts ache and pain
    Sorrow to wear as a uniform

    Stir the alphabet soup of emotion
    And where shall I place my faith
    Today

    I am no one
    I am someone
    I am
    Am I
    Anyone

    Where is the summation piecing together the equation
    Where do we fit
    Inside the excuses

    Have we turned our hands to much more intelligent things
    Than this intellect explains
    Doubt wrapped up in coloured cellophane

    We live; this borrowed agreement of perception
    Afraid to admit
    We know absolutely nothing

    Define life
    With paltry planetary, religious, cultural concepts
    And chew on the chicken feed of our ignorance

    And if the puzzle piece fits
    But doesn’t give you the picture you wanted
    You simply throw it away and replace it

    Trash you inherited
    Trash you bequeath
    The sweet assumption of a five-dollar shake
    Colloquial now in our suffering
    With the unity of isolation firmly in the distance
    At least we can carry on

    ( should I let you go
    let you fall back into hollow existence
    can I let you die inside
    just so you can live your empty life
    what battalion of love
    would then stand by my side
    if its banners should die of shame )

    Perhaps then we should calculate
    All the hither to’s and where fore’s
    And bleed in the silence of remembrance
    But never cross paths again

    Count the links of life by logarithms
    Count them by broken chains










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      contain yourself... log.. is ... =... 8^silly
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    | Posted on 2010-03-20 00:00:00 | by leocrates | [ Reply to This ]


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