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    dots Submission Name: Valentine's Day Speechdots
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    Author: justsaying
    Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 1/1/2
    Words: 401
    Class/Type: Misc/Fuck it all
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    dotsValentine's Day Speechdots
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    You say you love me, I don't buy it
    Sorry boy, I'm not a Barbie
    Yes I'm cute, but I also have a brain
    I won't stay waiting for you under the rain.
    And no I'm not overreacting...
    not even that you deserve watching.
    Hey don't act surprised
    'cause you knew this would happen,
    that someday you'd find a girl
    that wouldn't buy everything you say...
    Yes, I know what you pretend
    but sorry, you didn't win this time
    and this is me, me telling you why...

    You're an unbelieavably selfish thing
    though you always say you only think ok me.
    And any of your words is real,
    there's nothing about them that you really mean.

    And everytime you see me smile,
    let me tell you what's on my mind:
    Stop looking at me with those innocent eyes
    'cause I know very well what you're planning to do all night.

    And every song you dance with me,
    I know you've done with another thirteen
    So stop saying it's for me that you live,
    'cause babe, that's something I don't believe.

    And every "movies night" you come home,
    you think I don't know what's going on,
    but like I already told you before...
    my brain DOES WORK.
    So stop dreaming of me on your bed
    'cause it won't happen unless I'm dead.

    And every "conversation" on the phone
    it's all about you and basketball
    I'm not complaining, not at all,
    I'm just saying you got me bored.

    You're so selfish, boring, fake and liar,
    so liar, so liar, so freaking liar.
    I'll say it a thousand times,
    'till you can't get it out of your mind.
    Yes, I know maybe I'm a bitch,
    but hey, at least it's not like what you did,
    not to me, but to those hundreds of girls
    whose hearts were broken... by you big jerk.
    So this is not like a revenge,
    but yeah, maybe with this you'll get to pay
    HALF the pain you caused in your past
    ruining all those freaking lives.

    But getting back to the beginning,
    you say you love me, blah blah blah...
    though I know you're stupid and you think I could,
    NOPE, I can't say I love you too
    And please, don't be a baby boy, don't cry
    I'm just saying what you had to hear since you were 5. Bye.




    Submitted on 2010-03-16 19:01:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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