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    dots Submission Name: Ashamed Angeldots
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    Author: Spin
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 72/101/84
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsAshamed Angeldots
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    Just turn aside
    from pride
    fashion stays
    unstable and true
    blue is depression
    fresh and once bitten
    dead as red
    in Satan's bed
    face down
    crying in pillows
    swaying with willows
    howl at the moon
    soul bellows
    yellow as tight
    fighting primary
    still swelling
    bloated death
    and angels breath
    lead me back
    to Satan's bed.




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