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    dots Submission Name: Edge of night. Cool poem wriiten by Pippindots
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    Author: thelastman
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    dotsEdge of night. Cool poem wriiten by Pippindots
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    home is behind..
    the world ahead,
    there are still many paths to thread.
    through shadow,
    to the edge of night
    untill the stars all alight
    mist and shadows. Cloud and shade,
    all shall fade, all shall fade"
    Lord of the rings





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