This is an interesting piece. I can feel the hint of bitterness behind it; especially as how you describe this female.
There is a flow to it, but sometimes the words that are use mess up the flow, making the reader having to adjust. I suppose you can always go back and reedit this. Or somethign. It's your work, not mine.
I have to say, I found this line ironically funny.
"I am growing titanium skin to adjust to these whiplashes."
Because you have to put up with it, even if you don't want to stay? Cause it's simple to walk away. Or something. Who knows why you chose that, but I found it slightly funny. Heh.
Well, keep up the good work my friend, and remember that things happen for a reason
hmmm.... I definatly feel the emotions coming from this Piece of poetry. Although It does seem choppy at first glances I noticed when read at the right pace and with thought in every word That one will definatly find its flow. Also I can easyly relate to the work because I ended a bad relationship 'round 6 months ago and The way this is written and at the proper pace definatly made me think of what happened to myself. OK overall well done but (even in a venting) try to make the flow just slightly more obvious for readers who might not understand exatly where these kind of words are flowing from.