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    Author: Domiibaby
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/1/4
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/You left me
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    What if i am?
    Am what we alway worrie
    worry about the wrong of our doing...
    doing what we should have never done

    i guess we'll find out
    find out if your a daddy or not
    i have the time to say
    im glad i broke up with you

    immurture 'Boys"
    dont devere to be dads
    but i guess...
    it will be your kid

    if you help i guess you could be
    you could be the daddy
    by blood sure but
    but by the way you act

    i rlly like my man and all
    but if you are
    are willin to agian for the baby
    AT LEAST
    i can gave you a place in my heart again!

    BUt if you screw up...
    your gone! and
    and ill find someone to take your place!

    but agian i might be might noe haha! life Freakin Sucks




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