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    dots Submission Name: Co-operation..dots
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    Author: StylerDen
    ASL Info:    29/Male/Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 38/59/51
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Misc/Society
    Total Views: 759
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 379



    Description:
       My students were doing a champaign by selling food to helping chile, and the other group decided to follow their idea, but on helping tigers instead.. so i wrote this piece, hopefully to calm them down..


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    dotsCo-operation..dots
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    PYP 6
    Donít get into heat
    When people copied your style.

    Try thinking big,
    They are doing it,
    Helping our friends around.

    Though they are animals,
    And though they are weak,
    But think of it, their going extinct.

    Now start pondering,
    Over this choleric,
    Working together is style.




    Submitted on 2010-03-17 21:21:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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