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    dots Submission Name: juliet dreamdots
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    Author: Spin
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    dotsjuliet dreamdots
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    Has it ever been so dark
    where sparks will blind
    and skittish mimes find their voice
    in your displeasure.
    We all measure life with different scales
    a new found freedom will come when you you cheat with your thumb and throw the scales in your direction.
    Faces look less likely to judge
    rich like fudge your safe harbor has dried
    and I sail away with the breeze
    only to return with the storm
    haze and stage your demise in the theater of life
    I will be Romeo and you my Juliet will beg
    who let you dream as it seems
    it was not at all my intention.
    Nor is it your right.






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