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    dots Submission Name: Preface to Broken Moondots

    Author: Granger
    ASL Info:    17
    Elite Ratio:    1.82 - 13/29/24
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Fanfic/Friendship
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       This is a preface to the book that I am writing. It is called Broken Moon

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    dotsPreface to Broken Moondots

    I NEVER KNEW HOW MUCH MY LIFE MEANT TO ME—though at least I got the chance to tell everyone I know and love goodbye. Even in the last few months I had reason enough to know how I would die.
    I looked around the modern-made auditorium and glanced at my stalker.
    I was holding on to my two little brothers—who were kidnapped by this sadistic killer. Glancing into the dark eyes of our hunter; I could tell he was hungry for more than just blood. He was hungry for the lust of power. Watching as my twin brother and my cousin strapped to those chairs in the middle of the auditorium—it was hard to bear that their lives will be changed forever.
    It’s not the same thing—when it’s not the same person you know. The person you trust and love. Insanity, that’s what they call it now and days.
    Coming back to Paint Rock Valley was a mistake; I should’ve known by now, but I decided to stay. When you are given a choice—you have to pick either one. Even if it means that you could sacrifice yourself for the ones you love.
    We barely stepped back as our killer hungrily crouched towards us. With a smile across his sinister face; he was ready to make the final strike...

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      Well, considering it was just a preface; you had me locked.
    Right away, there's this "WAM!" that makes you want to continue reading. You did well to keep this reader hungry for more. Though there are minor mistakes, I'd go over it (maybe you just wrote this in something of a hurry?). The small preview you offered makes me want to skip the rest of the summary and get straight to reading.
    You know how to get a person interested.
    Good job.

    | Posted on 2010-03-19 00:00:00 | by Koukoro | [ Reply to This ]

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