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Submission Name:
Haiku
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Author:
BenCollier
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3.72 - 425/386/88
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11
Class/Type:
Poetry/Longing
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I wrote this while bringing my kids to school one morning. It just hit me. Wrote it in about 10 minutes. So if it is bad you know why.
Haiku
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Begone winter's grip
Lands awaken from slumber
Rejoice in new birth!
Submitted on 2010-03-19 13:36:03
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I see this was written in march. I'm always ready for spring by then also. This is not at all bad. Haiku is really hard to make totally new and creative, but I do like this. It's usually my exact sentiment come February.
| Posted on 2016-01-07 00:00:00 | by
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attack of the clone
the funny clown is crazy
immolation protest... onegood line
| Posted on 2010-03-20 00:00:00 | by
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