I always reckon it's a pity the second-last stanza is necessary! As one of those wierd men who like women, I lose some of friends because of sexual tension. And friendship is the whole secret anyway ....
This unusual love-song started me thinking thoughts like that and remembering the feelings. It must be a good poem!
Funny, the metre or rhythm "sounds" a bit awkward when I read silently - but recited out loud it sounds fine! I guess that's song-writing?
Lol you know what this reminds me a lot of a friend mine--ahem, fana?--nice poem. I like the lacing of humor in it and your use of rhyming words, although at some places it looks like you forced that rhyme into place. But hey, it's about having a good time, and it gives you the feeling of a good time, so that's good enough. But then again, with a little editing it can be better.