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    dots Submission Name: It Took Himdots
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    Author: Hasanur
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 365
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       ~Hi, I'm Hasanur and I just started on this site just now and I'm hoping to receive any feedback from you guys.


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    dotsIt Took Himdots
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    It was a serene place,
    A world of two people,
    A place filled with beauty and immense love,
    A grandson and a grandfather-
    A living bone unbreakable.
    Yet Thanatos took the Grandfather...
    It flung the grandson into a great depression
    Where he lost himself.

    A luminous light spread over the village.
    The rivers sparkled with gleaming lights.
    A Blowing of the wind spread on the grandson's face
    As the grandson and grandfather spent their time fishing,
    Lying on the boat seeing the ocean breath's wave, inhale and release
    As they lay there thinking how life is enjoyable in its simplest form.
    It was a happy memory; every minute all of life's worries were blown away.


    He swore to himself to never
    again let another loved one be
    taken by Thanathos.
    His anguish and hatred grew deeper
    than the anger of a god!

    In the depths of his mind
    Life's melancholy swept over.
    Yet, a time passed the tribulation of his torment ceased,
    the raging tidal wave turning into the calming and soothing waves of the blue ocean.
    The sea struck the shade from his immovable heart.


    The Grandfather's love
    still filled his heart, and time moved
    on for the grandson.
    Life's afflictions subsided into immense adulation.
    I am this grandson!




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