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    dots Submission Name: Space-Time-Energy = Infinitydots
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    Author: MasterlessLight
    ASL Info:    28/M/MI
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/0/3
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Riddle/Misc
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    dotsSpace-Time-Energy = Infinitydots
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    The search begins
    The narrow pinpoint of dream light
    A road through the macro-consciousness
    Upon that stretch of infinite beginning
    Have those denizens lapped up the yoke of creation

    Bring the vision to bare
    From that place where the rules do not apply
    Energy is thought to no end
    Mind is the maker and breaker

    Where darkness matters
    Focus will be brought on what is not visible
    The dominant link from force to zone
    Yields only to the sleeper's oblivion





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