Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Space-Time-Energy = Infinitydots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: MasterlessLight
    ASL Info:    28/M/MI
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/0/3
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Riddle/Misc
    Total Views: 913
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 576



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSpace-Time-Energy = Infinitydots
    -------------------------------------------


    The search begins
    The narrow pinpoint of dream light
    A road through the macro-consciousness
    Upon that stretch of infinite beginning
    Have those denizens lapped up the yoke of creation

    Bring the vision to bare
    From that place where the rules do not apply
    Energy is thought to no end
    Mind is the maker and breaker

    Where darkness matters
    Focus will be brought on what is not visible
    The dominant link from force to zone
    Yields only to the sleeper's oblivion





    Submitted on 2010-03-21 02:48:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    183908

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Summer written by layDsayD
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Carry written by saartha
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Love written by saartha
    Etiquette written by saartha
    AI written by poetotoe
    Push written by JanePlane
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    prison written by ShyOne
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    untitled written by ShyOne
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Cover written by saartha
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry