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    dots Submission Name: Dear Onedots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 14/83/123
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 492
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    Bytes: 440



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    dotsDear Onedots
    -------------------------------------------


    Fetch me my heart
    dear one.
    For it has fallen from my chest
    where it was safely
    locked
    away.

    Fetch me my heart dear one
    and I will love you as well as I can.

    Fetch me my heart dear one and I shall
    make promises to you.

    Fetch me my
    heart
    dear one

    And I shall
    be
    whole
    with you





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