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    dots Submission Name: Time With Medots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 494
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       Taken from my upcoming poem book "LEGACY"


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    dotsTime With Medots
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    I’m not asking for your hand in marriage
    Not even asking for a lifetime with you
    Just want sometime baby
    So we can talk and hang out like friends do
    Even talk on the phone
    Text all night long
    Watch a movie in your home
    Listen to your favorites songs

    I know my may not be Romeo
    Or the man of your dreams
    But I will treat better
    Than any other human being
    I can’t afford it all
    I maybe short not tall
    But my hearts in the right place
    If you give it a chance you’d be amazed
    Just one time to spend with me
    Just a second of your life
    And you will know how I feel for you
    Deep inside…




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