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    dots Submission Name: Huxley’s Paparazzi dots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsHuxley’s Paparazzi dots
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    To be awake
    Is to be alive

    Liquid oblivion shot through the needle
    And into his vein
    Once again the condemned escape
    Lead its illegal emancipation
    Without question
    As to why

    Nothing more than an overdose of filthy rooms
    Where the pushers luxury ties the noose
    And one mans sickness
    Is another mans wealth

    She scoured the shelves
    The clothes hangers of the individual
    Something bright and cute to define the void
    Tailor-made
    As conscience she of fashion played
    By the slickness of its label

    Nothing more than electrical numbness
    As it sucks in the fuming exhaust
    And one woman beauty
    Is sold to the cosmetics of its pornography

    They line up, they queue up, stand up in their droves
    Addicted to every cent of their drug
    Decimal points of profit and loss
    The means to know, the meaning of life
    Or be the penniless scarecrows
    Of narcotics abuse

    Nothing more than the narcissism fed
    To counter the necrosis of the heart
    A desperation of meaning
    A filled to the brim, of emptiness

    Paperweights of comfort
    The printed addictions of dollar bills
    Of life’s “ oh I am so happy ” little thrills
    In a social intoxication
    The seducing, senility of its proliferated acceptance
    And the drug abuse of money

    Nothing more than Huxley’s paparazzi




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      Hmmm...your poems are quite seething...I do say....seething.
    | Posted on 2010-03-26 00:00:00 | by xxiknownowxx | [ Reply to This ]


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