Sign up to EliteSkills

Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password


Author: Midorininja
ASL Info:    16/secret/Michigan
Elite Ratio:    2.03 - 6 /9 /11
Words: 51
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 634
Average Vote:    5.0000
Bytes: 283



A love that I have yet to choose,
Has me hidden, sad, and confused.
There is nothing to be done,
Just pick them out, one by one.
I may have a chance,
If I step out on the branch.
But what will it matter
If I fall and shatter?

Submitted on 2010-03-23 06:56:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!


  Thank you.
| Posted on 2010-05-14 00:00:00 | by Midorininja | [ Reply to This ]
  Even though this was short poem it did explain quite a bit and I admire that one can speak so few words and it says a whole story. As I did read this over i actually felt a bit of emotion. So I must say you did a perfect job of writing this. I felt the emotion you used when you wrote it....or so i beleive :)
| Posted on 2010-03-23 00:00:00 | by cherrywillow | [ Reply to This ]

Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?