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    dots Submission Name: The Tidedots
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    Author: mandyshay07
    ASL Info:    17/f/kentucky yall!
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 119/121/32
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 324
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 553



    Description:
       a poem a friend wrote for me...i thought it was really sweet so i decided to post it..hope ya like but it wont really hurt my feelins if you dont cuz i loved it:)


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    dotsThe Tidedots
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    My feelings for you are like the sea's for the shore,
    so strong it keeps coming back for more.
    Each grain it takes, a memory;
    but it's not enough for me, the sea.
    There always appears to be something more grand
    thats just out of reach, its you the land,
    and so it continues to lap on the shore
    taking what is given and nothing more..
    hoping one day that the land will be free
    to come and to dwell with the sea.

    By: a friend..who will remain anonomous for the moment




    Submitted on 2004-07-24 02:43:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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