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    dots Submission Name: miles awaydots

    Author: cherrywillow
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 29/47/32
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsmiles awaydots

    Tears fill my eyes as I see you.
    I run to you embracing.
    I look up to see you smiling.
    You look at me for seconds
    then pull me into another
    loving embrace.

    Your scent evermore lingers
    opon me. I never want to let go.
    Your arms shelter me from pain
    and your glourious voice brightens
    my life.

    I thought I knew how much I
    loved you but I was wrong.
    Not being able to see you or to hear
    your voice and not feeling your arms around me almost ended me.

    My love for you is so strong,
    I want to be with you always
    I never will let go, you have
    made living understandable.

    Forever you shall stay
    in my mind, in my heart.
    I will never forget your amazing smile
    Nor your loving gaze.

    Your soft lips,
    your silk touch,
    your smooth voice.
    And your unforgetable
    face. How am I not to love you?

    You have become the reason
    I breathe. But knowing your still mine
    Keeps me alive. No matter the miles I
    shall never forget you.

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      I think in most cases one may have been confounded by this. But I find it easily related to. Even though you know it was wrong, you couldn't help yourself. And this is the fault in most relations. I greatly enjoyed this piece and give you thumbs all the way up!!! Keep up the good write.
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