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    dots Submission Name: This Morningdots
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    Author: webdevil
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    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThis Morningdots
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    This morning
    i woke up to the melodies of singing birds
    birds filled with the beauty of life
    then i pondered on the philosophies of life
    i searched the recesses of my mind
    and just one golden beam
    blazed through the eternal cosmos
    i followed it's path
    and i saw lettering's etched in flames
    echoing the reason for life
    the very breath of soul,
    then i awoke from my meditations
    and perceived the leaves of grass
    and i understood the meaning of life.





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