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    dots Submission Name: A Perfect Circledots

    Author: Eyamma
    ASL Info:    16/Sry, I'm taken/Alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 22/21/77
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 682
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsA Perfect Circledots

    Time is a broken record
    Repeating the same events over and over,
    like a fading echo in the spacious depths of my mind

    Maybe, in time, this will turn to a flourishing
    Fulfill us, fulfill...fulfill this dying pressure
    as it progresses into something worth its while
    Worth the fight we've put up

    Our sky can't be the limit, if our hearts burn like stars
    Time to open eyes
    Time to free me from this perfect circle
    of restless pacing
    around a pointless predicament

    "Giggle as the flames grow higher,
    no need for the old empire."~Indigo Children[Puscifer]

    Wed March 17, 2010~4:10 AM
    *Your Cuntry Boner*

    Submitted on 2010-03-25 12:19:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It was an enjoyable read. I really like it. c;
    | Posted on 2010-03-28 00:00:00 | by RaptureRequiem | [ Reply to This ]
      Do you mean "A Perfect Circle"?
    | Posted on 2010-03-26 00:00:00 | by WhatYouWill | [ Reply to This ]

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