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    dots Submission Name: Wrath of the machinesdots
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    Author: Dark Dann
    ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78/67/53
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 601
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1459



    Description:
       Random, aggressive, hateful, and god knows what else. What was I thinking as I wrote this? I was taking a shower. haha.

    I like it, though it's not my normal stuff >.>



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    dotsWrath of the machinesdots
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    Stick it!
    Save your soul and stick it!
    (there's no rest for the wicked)
    Save your soul and stick it!

    There's no rest for you and me
    There's no time machine
    We can't go back in time
    Just move up in life
    Do you think you can have it
    That break from reality?
    That's it, you can't have it!
    You're a sick abnormality!

    We are!
    (save the best for me)
    We are
    (You're dead to me)
    We are
    (save the best for me)
    We are
    Wrath of the machines!

    We are wrath of the machines!
    You are, fuckin' dead to me!
    We are, wrath of the machines!

    SO stick!
    You better fuckin' stick it!
    Save your soul and stick it!
    (You're a freak of reality)
    Save your soul and stick it!
    (Just another abnormality)


    We are
    (Save the best for me)
    We are
    (wrath of the machines)
    We are
    (save the best for me)

    We are, wrath of the machines
    you are, fuckin' dead to me
    we are, wrath of the machines
    You are, fuckin' dead to me!

    So save your soul and let it!
    Save your soul and let...
    Let go
    Take your hands in the air
    Truth will never so..
    cold






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    ||| Comments |||
      lol *istalkmurdoch*

    how classy is that to misspell your own name.

    oh and I remember the band

    Project 86

    they are really good punk, crazy lyrics.
    | Posted on 2010-05-07 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it, and that's saying a lot. I usually don't comment on poems that use profanity, it's nothing personal, I just don't have a taste for that kind of stuff.

    but it reminded me of like a punk/metal song, not really poetry, with all of the repeating lines and all. it would be a good song in my opinion, just censored, but you wrote it, so it's yours.

    keep writing

    isatlkmurdoch
    | Posted on 2010-05-07 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]


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