Description: I'm actually rather pleased with this.
However, I only just finished it right now, and haven't let it stew yet. Things could change.
Edit: Okay, something I surprisingly didn't realize (thanks, raincloud!) was that this poem has a very similar ending to my other poem The Book. So if any of you have any suggestions for a different ending, they would be very much appreciated. Thanks!
Hey I like this, how did you come up with the idea to link two such unrelated things? Brilliant.
There's also a sort of romanticism to this that kind of makes it seem really natural (excuse the pun). I especially like the 'fluttering water' as though the water has wings.
The only suggestions I would make is possibly get rid of the 'you have tilled the wide expanse that is my back' line (this might be a typo) as it kind of repeats the the line above and detracts from the rest of the poem.
Also did you purposefully not use the word 'orchards' instead of 'apple-tree forests'?