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    dots Submission Name: The Perfect Womandots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 586
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Perfect Womandots
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    Is there such a thing ¿
    It would be like asking ice to melt into honey

    The perfect woman
    Where is she ¿

    Who is she
    Might as well ask the stars to candy coat meat

    Hidden away in make up
    With the war paint slapped in plastic surgery

    Covered up and extruded as if she
    Where the role model fulfilled, designed by society

    Or is she a cultural backwash
    Who knows what a woman is; do women ?

    The perfect woman
    Subservient ( submissive and weak in her courage and strength to give )

    The perfect woman
    Dominant ( over powering and reliant on the fawning aspect of a mans weakness )

    But still sold by the pornography and prostitution
    Of happily married

    I need you, I exchange you
    For security

    With this abused face of the twentieth century
    Woman is commodity

    You come, to the parched world of lonely men ( lonely men )
    Like a promise ( a goddess ) for rent

    And sell yourself simpleton
    Wrap yourselves in the postulated boundaries of expectation

    You could have saved the world
    Woman

    But no
    You let it die on the price

    You sucked on reverse ego
    And became slaves to your own sacrifice ( and sought confirmation )

    Where are you ….. woman
    In this masculine fuck up of a world that has no soul or spiritual

    Are you counting eyelashes
    And wishing you had bigger breasts ( tits and boobs )

    What man would kneel before you now
    And worship The Goddess ( except to praise a purchasable item )

    Where are you Isis, Gaia and Dianna
    Where is your temperance ( where is your courage and strength )

    You have all blamed men for the sorry state we are in
    So where are you now….. all of you….. women

    Where is the defender, the mother, the lioness
    Who would sit with her paws bleeding until the last breath

    You have watched men, shackle and ruin this world
    And you have gone along with it

    Where are you, lover, and temptress of power
    Where is the nurture and the essence of birth

    And why
    Why have you forsaken the world

    I carry still, a Sabre, a sword, a Rapier, a Katana
    Ready to defend by all of this body muscle and strength

    But you do not call
    You do not call with any intent

    You merely whimper in the shadows of men
    And god forbid, you accept any, responsibility

    Where are you Isis, Gaia and Dianna
    Where is your wisdom and compassion

    Where is your spirit, your soul and your heart
    Feminine created, intrinsic, all-important counterpart

    The world dies, we die, humanity dies, is dieing, is dead and rotting
    Without them ( you ) woaman

    Bespeak me not of your pulchritude
    Lest I whimper in silence
    Burn me not, as an effigy of hate and excuse
    But look to yourselves
    And to all that you have sold yourselves to
    You place no claim, no right, no stand
    You bow like sops before the will of paltry men

    But men such as me
    You scorn, by your faith and preference of money

    Where are you Isis, Gaia and Dianna
    Where are you woman, thee ( my ) warrior





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