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    dots Submission Name: Picturesdots
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    Author: monkiigirl
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 4/2/3
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Religious
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       just a little prasie for God


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    dotsPicturesdots
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    If you look uo in the sky,
    you will see pictures pass by.
    There is only one name in which they are called
    that is a cloud white and unflawed.
    If you look down a country road,
    you dont think much,say,of a toad
    there was a picture of Gods masterpiece
    the pictures He makes will not seece
    We're part of His masterpiece you and I
    they're all here,just passing by.




    Submitted on 2010-03-26 18:50:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If you look up in the sky,
    you will see pictures pass by.
    There is only one name in which they are called
    that is a cloud white and unflawed.
    If you look down a country road,
    you dont think much, say ,of a toad
    there was a picture of Gods masterpiece
    the pictures He makes will not cease
    We're part of His masterpiece you and I
    they're all here, just passing by.

    Few errors good essay too bad I don't believe in a god or have any religous views currently...
    Liked the idea though. ^-^ Good job
    | Posted on 2010-03-30 00:00:00 | by cyberpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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