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    dots Submission Name: My darling childdots
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    Author: monkiigirl
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 4/2/3
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       im not a mother nor even near twenty i just took it from a mothers preception for her child


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    dotsMy darling childdots
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    As the sun sets on this beautiful day
    I love you,my darling child
    the sun is setting no more regretting
    with winds light and mild

    When you come home from school
    with a glow so meek and mild,
    even on the rainiest of days
    I love you,my darling child

    The day you became my favorite best,
    to the time i bought your first prom dress
    and the days when you werent wild
    I love you,my darling child




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