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Bloody Belladonna

Author: Monsun
ASL Info:    17/Male/Berlin Germany
Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 17 /18 /15
Words: 179
Class/Type: Lyrics /Them
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Bloody Belladonna

Lets Just collapse
and let us deny
Shut out everyone's lie
Just watch the daylight elapse.

Drag your nails unto my coffin
sipping on what you drank last night
you cant bare to see my slient Sight
your soul is the same as the virgin


sit in you tree house in the sky
Who cares if we die
my life was my lie
seep down to your knees a cry
and weep this lie
When everyone is a plastic pre-madonna
just hold tightly to your Bloody Belladonna

Atropine hold me back
I cant hold on much longer
Allow your love to make me stronger
Solanine, my visions turning black



Bloody Belladonna
lift me above the rest
slowly lay me to my rest
Fuck all you Pre-madonna

Submitted on 2010-03-26 22:16:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Interesting poem, but... "Chorus"??
| Posted on 2010-03-27 00:00:00 | by Waffaz | [ Reply to This ]

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